Laden eyelids curtain yellow stained sclera
It falls. Debilitating. Sun-baked and bleak.
Eye lashes wither away by turns
Whisk off towards faraway clarion
Luring chime pantomimes her wish for hope
Rest on a slipping palm to swear
She blew and it flown
Into the sky, briskly burnt by the dominant eye
Ash sprinkles in patterns of an omen
Cold shouldered behind the shade of a cryptic cloud
I seek your emergence
Say Peek-A-Boo!
Vestigial wings on wrinkled terrestrial body
Land borne vision ventures towards horizon
Shudders with the masked face running across the green
Halt. Take off. Snare me I plead
Say Peek-A-Boo!
Walking dead and bowed head
Crisp sight to behold the sights infinite
Yet so devoid of you
Where are you?
You exist.
I exist.
Do WE exist?
Perhaps we do. I know we do.
Beyond the skies, beyond the horizon we shall meet
In the space lit with fire
It burns covertly
Of what remains of body, wet eyelash and ash
My hands unfurl on your face
Brightened eyes nude of wait state
A wink, a gaze, world swirls with craze
An engulfing smile daunts distance left dazed
Free of fate and fleeting time
Whispering lips
Shivering words
We unite
We say Peek-A-Boo!
I seek you.
I need to see you.
©Written Frames, 2017
P.S. One day we will meet for sure!!
Amazing it is. Loved the imageries. ❤️
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Thank you Priya…💓💓💓💓
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Something different and poignant!
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Thanks!!
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Hi
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Hi
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How are you ?
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Good…thank you 🙂
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Lol you won’t ask about me ?
Very bad …
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I apologize but I hardly come across people who would knock at the door so to be asked how they are doing!!
All i can manage to do is – roll my eyes…:)😊😊😊😊😊
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Haha…
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Haha Nishtur😂😂
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Do you know him! 🙂
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I know him from the comment which he has written. 😂😂
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😊
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Merry Xmas Shefali
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Merry Christmas….:)
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The imagery of this piece is simply excellent. Such a gorgeous work babe 🙂
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I enjoyed writing this piece…. though lots of backspaces came into picture as I landsaped this….
Thank you for stopping by….I am glad you liked my effort!
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Ah, how could I not? It was as I’ve said, gorgeous.
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💓💓
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Shefali i must admit i learned lot of new english words from your poem. But i didn’t get this poem fully. can you explain?
i guess at the start of poem you are blowing a feather like light weight substance(maybe a wish to see something or someone emerging from behind the clouds) from your palm. is it somewhat correct?sorry if this is not what you meant.
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You are on the point with summary of this poem…. First stanza deals with weariness of the body waiting for a glance of the one…eyelashes withering away and rests on a palm to wish… wish for the one to appear…. with second and third stanza I seek omens and signs about the one’s existence, searching him all around where the vision goes but all in vain. And then i end it with a hope to meet beyond horizon where we exist and where we will see each other… and this hide and seek willbe over as our hearts will be filled with warmth and ecstasy finding each othet in the space i never knew existed before….
☺😊
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Thanks shefali and merry christmas 🙂
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Merry christmas
☺
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It has taken me several days and several reads to be able to comment.
I see this as a grand piece with several intrinsic pearls that grab the reader in pleasing ways.
“An engulfing smile daunts distance left dazed” is pure spoken word that can’t be read in silence. In fact the whole piece floods my room as I read aloud.
Call me biased, call me an amateur WordPresser …. but I rely upon my feelings when I read you. And you provoke me deep.
❤️
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I am delighted to read the very first line of your comment!… Do you hear my heart pounding? 🙂 🙂 🙂
If you wouldn’t have read this piece with all the depth and feelings , I do not know who would! You just gave me another reason to be in love with this carcass of words!!
Thank you Diana! And I will try my best to drag you deeper and deeper into the depths I feel and wish to share the same with you over time ❤ ❤
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You may take me deep; fully immerse me in your inventive and always surprising creations.
There is something else that happens when I read you. There is a sense of completeness – like I have lived the full story not just tasted an aperitif! I’m left satisfied and smiling.
❤️
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O how much I am in love with those dimples as you smile….!!
Thank you dearest D…. With your words, you make me fall in love with myself!! Thanks again ❤ ❤
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There is much in you to adore precious poet ❤️
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❤ ❤
I was just a random poet before… And now I am precious too!
❤ ❤
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Random crossing of paths … perhaps … but precious you are since many a year ❤️
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Quite often people write poetry as a metaphor. We all do, but its quite clear that you deeply mean every word you say 🙂
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Thank you for this wonderful feedback Prashant….😊
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Excellent work . I didn’t understand 100% at first.
I Googled it to understand and have read more than 10 times till now.
After several ways of understanding this piece of work,
You are provoking , you are creating a desire in me, you are making me biased towards you,
I just loved it when I understood 100%❤️👍🏻 you this piece of work is dragging me deeper into the depths of words and emotions I feel. 👏🏻
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Thank you so much for taking time and digging deep into my work. I am elated to know that!
🙂
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Loved it.Amazing
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Thank you buddy…….☺😊
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Poignant and the longing, the hope. I hope it happens, one day ❤ ❤
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So do I hope….. Though I wonder if I am sure of what I am longing for . …
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When you find it you will know 🙂 ❤
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