Your elegant touch
On my diligently hushed skin
With soapy mousse crowned
Smear forth the froth
Knead my skin in layers of you
See that spot on spicy smiles
A brilliant blink blooms in eyes
Nibble tease on my neck
Misty mirror cast bedimmed reflections
Shy of exquisite initials etched
In your arms-cage
Captivated and surrendered
Desires so restrained exhaled
Dripping from your lips
Dreamlike flames
Sipping the sap of your soul I seek
Slurping lips, interlaced grips
Ah!! With a splash we dash
Entwined ecstasy
Dance of dangling droplets
Heat radiates from the gaps
Steamy surmounted frames
In between a rainbow does rise
I am a vagabond and you are my ride
Take me to the places
I sigh
©Written Frames, 2017
Damn this is good.. 👍👍
Beautiful with the right amount of erotic but not too much.. Subtle 💞
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Thank you…😁😁😁😁😁
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fuck yes
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What kind of response is that!!…😊
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it’s a positive one haha
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Haha…😊😊
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Sweet vagabond, your journey begins in a steamy soapy mousse of blissful self discovery … but pack your bindle, this sensual path is destined to be shared.
I adore your use of heady alliterations: the spiced smiles, desires dripping dreamlike and dancing,dangled droplets.
This is a “work of midnight hours”.
I’m captivated. Take me …
❤️
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‘Work of midnight hours’…. makes me smile 🙂 🙂 🙂
And I definitely know your love for alliterations… It always catch your eye…
🙂 🙂
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Beautiful, everyday things catch my eye. A flower people pass by, catching a ray of sunlight…
You are not an everyday thing 🙂
You are exceptional and I feel it in your words.
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Beautiful……
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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So elegantly sensual…
🤗🤗
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💓💓💓💓💓💓
thank you dear B….I enjoyed writing this …
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May I say your imagery is brilliant!
❤️❤️
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Fortunately…not just imagery….😍😍😍😍😍😍
Thank you sweetheart…..May I say how glad I am to receive this compliment from you, who is the master of leaving people spellbound and gaped with her sensual magic of words…
😍😍😍😍
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Aww.
You are kind my dear!❤️
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Ohh, very romantic!
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Thank you 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Wow… I decoded
First paragraph – kneading the flour
Second paragraph – a beauty parlour
Third paragraph – the cigarette
And final paragraph – the ice cream….
Right?
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I wonder which algorithm you used to decode it… 😛 😛 😛 😛
Well, this poem is just one of many wild fantasy …love under shower…. hope you enjoy it more with one more read… 🙂
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I tried….but there was no Cauvery water supply….so the wild one was tamed….
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🙂
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Beautiful written. 🙂
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Many thanks…😊
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🙂
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I think when a woman writes about wild fantasies of making love, it looks more beautiful 🙂
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I think it is all about passion running through our blood…
Thank you Sherin!!! 😊😊😊
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So engulfing and sultry lines. You are so good at this.
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Thank you Sifan…. I am glad you enjoyed your read…..
Happy new year…😊
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Happy new year to you too.
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Oh what a beautiful, subtly sensual poem, yes you captivated me.
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This piece is one of my favorites and my first attempt on erotica.. I am glad it captivated you 🙂
Many thanks Ivor.
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Ah, I found it at top of your Fav’s list, It’s so very well written, I wrote a fun one, more like just a play on words, I’ll see if I can extract it for you
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2017/08/05/inside-out/
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I totally loved it !! Thanks for sharing… 🙂
It definitely brought a smile and mischievous look on my face.. 😀 😀 😀
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