we demand ignorance
negotiate over the ‘first time’
a dilettante at recording happenings
as the present segues to the past
in a blink, in a click
the tongue slays
burnt stubs rest in ashtray
we smolder to live the mistakes
cinders multiply and the experience stays
archetypal complexion of blue skies
always a first time
dark and clouded, it rains
first cry, first love, first ache
fails us, in itself it never fails
‘The first’ happens and plays
a buttress for ‘the second’
‘The third’ to lose or gain
steps stumble
©Written Frames, 2018
P.S. The first time moments trigger a will to live this life. This picture was taken on my first ever visit to a beach. It took me 24 years to see the mighty waves sing a lullaby of forever to this frail heart of mine. I surrendered to the beauty of it and there is no single morning after, that I did not wish to wake up by the sound of waters flowing…..
This is freaking fabulous! The image, the intelligence of the words wrapping around me and seeping into my thoughts. It’s a stunning piece Shefi, you have me reflecting on the wonderful firsts of my past and the firsts that are yet to come.
Thank you for such a sublime fistful of profound! This writing will stand the test of time.
❤
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This poem is more of a thought and question on the first times that did not turn out well… how we excuse ourselves from situations and tag them as first time mistakes, lies…
This poem reflects a moment of happiness for why first times are intriguing and motivate to have few more first times and moments…first love…..first kiss……
First times may fail us but it never fails in itself for first times are meant to happen and leave the impressions for forever on the wall newly cemented.
First time ignites us well, and the smolders of the life already lost calls for the experience we had when we had been burning…..
I did not expect you to receive this piece with such appreciation. You warmed my heart. Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Wandering Armadillo and commented:
As an Australian, it is sometimes hard for me to appreciate that some may not see the ocean until they are decades into their lives. Perhaps never…
There are so many other firsts in life, and @Written Frames makes us ponder them with this great piece of writing!
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Hooray moment! 😀 😀 😀 😀
It is an honor to be re-blogged by you…
And to shock you… it took my mom 58 years to see a beach… how diverse our lives are dear Diana!… we live around the ocean…only a portion of perimeter at hand… but possibilities to travel across only if we are ready and to risk… 🙂
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Good.. but u have to give PC😉😉😉
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Amazing poem and pic. I agree. I am almost sixty and my husband and I have been travelling across the US, having so many first – I feel more alive than I have in years.
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Dear V.J… I am so glad to have you here and know how you can relate to this poem… Many thanks!
Few days back I read a line which caught me off guard … “What was the last time you did something for the first time?”… and how glad I am you are able to break this loop of comfort and consistency and is able to create such first times…….
May you both have wonderful moments together… ❤ ❤
Once again , thank you and welcome to Written Frames 🙂
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You are welcome. So happy to have found you!
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Oh so beautiful! I can feel and relate how a first visit to the ocean could be like first love and each time after is like falling in love again and again. That feeling wants me to return as many times again.
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And so do I. I will soon be returning to the mighty waters and will empty my heart at the shore, let waves swipe it all along…. How emotionally buoyant we feel there…<3 ❤
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Your thoughts are poetry 🙂 and I am so happy we share the this beautiful love for the ocean.
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You are a sweet soul.. ❤ ❤ ❤
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Such a huge lump in my throat …. your words are beyond description! You blow me away, Shefali! New beginnings, firsts … every time we do something to me is a “first” for the “time”, the “day”, the “circumstance” differs in a very unique way. Thus, a new first.
Why the lump in throat? I’ve been to the ocean and I dream to this day of those days. My desire, my dream is to live near the ocean. There is something so magnetic as the waves ebb and flow. I can just imagine your awe as you sat on the sand just to BE with those waves. 💞
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It was definitely hard for me to take my eyes off the ocean. The Sun was orange with blush to see my eyes sparkling wet with love….. It was so beautifully serene and yes magnetic as you say 🙂
Thank you Amy for your kind words… May you get to live near the waters and have mornings running along the sea line… barefooted…. 🙂
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Not sure about the running part but I definitely can see the barefoot …. LOL And your description of how you felt at what you saw …. beautiful!! 💖
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and as you said this… I can feel the wetness of granular sand under my foot…. so soft… so warm….
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*sighs deeply* I can feel it ….
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Hmmm….I saw the sea for the first time when I attained twenty four…..that too at kanyakumari….where it is just awesome….the trio just can mesmerise any one….just unexplainable….
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I understand this feeling… Mine was not so popular beach but it was worth it.
Besant Nagar Beach Chennai…. 🙂
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Then KK is surely worth trying….you will have….still more magical poetry pouring in….
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After that I have been to some awesome beaches at Pondicherry and Kerala… 🙂
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Tere mere beach Mein….only Indian Ocean is missing….
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Lovely piece of writing, especially the second para for me!
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Thank you Kunal… 🙂
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It’s a beautiful blog
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O my! How you shower me with all love and appreciation!… 🙂 Thank you!
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When it’s pleasure in giving love you felt better too…
I must not stop now…
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So, Shefali i admit you are such a nature lover or sea lover. if you ask me if a writer can write about love beautifully without falling in love i would say yes. But again the word experiences comes to mind. You must have loved or missed someone special in real life, maybe a lover. Is that right? Just asked out of curiousity. No need to answer if you don’t want to, okay?
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