See me when
When I belong to the sky of dusk
Sun-kissed simmering beauty unwraps the stars under twilight
The fierce falls silent in colorful peace painted with a pen
See me then
See me when
When I dream of the dreams you dream
Of graveled shores teased as you tiptoe the layers of the stream
Beneath the oceans I dwell with wrinkly fingers awake to the melody of passing by wren
See me then
See me when
When I am full of truth and you beside
Truth is fought and you accepted, a flower embosomed in this core of coal
The fist of petals unfurls, your stretched hand for me to hold and den
See me then
See me then
To watch me become forever yours
Till then, until we fall hard enough to rise
We wait!
©Written Frames, 2018
Written Frames 
What a subtle, elegant, soft, sensual (and smart…) poem…
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Thanks a ton for this immense love!
Sweetest B ❤
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Thank you for being so special… 🤗🤗
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Special to you….. Very! … so you are to me ❤
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Love this… has to be said out loud.
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Gratitude ❤
Thank you so much!
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Very well written.
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Nice one!
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Thank you Khushi!! ❤
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You’re welcome!
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❤
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Oh, this is mighty!
This is a majestic, beautifully written piece.
Must I pronounce it my favourite write of yours? You bring me to my knees with exceptional phrases
“a flower embosomed in this core of coal”. You are tapping into gasp inducing expression.
Divine!
❤️
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O Precious D ❤
Don't you dare to pronounce your favorite just yet. Let me sharpen all my weapons of love and warmth to try on you unless you are week at knees and won't aspire to get up again… wilful surrender…
❤ ❤
Much love and gratitude ❤
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Your words are the very walls that keep me upright, wanting more…preventing my knees from buckling under the weight of anticipated bliss.
Sharpen your arrows, aim them true … add rainbowed feathers and I’ll know they’re from you…
Today’s favourite shall be tomorrow’s prequel..
❤️❤️
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Cannot stop reading these beautiful lines….. How we can change our ways, our preferences and may chose to bear the consequences only if we know it is from them… the ones we love…. love is a strange thing Diana…. and with you by my side it is becoming stranger day by day…
❤
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It is both strange and cannot be anticipated. It is like a new shadow that you notice for the first time as you have been looking the other way, distracted.
It’s a part of you but it is the very light source than can surprise and delight.
Face the light and be brave, precious one…
♥️
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Bravery is the only virtue I need to be friendly with to take all the decisions I desperately need to…
❤
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You are as mighty as the summer rose that endures the sudden chill of autumn. Your resolve will preserve you through any storm.
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Hope not to be plucked before I get to see two seasons… ! !
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Plucked, and folded between my hands like a breathtaking dried flower…
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And there I will continue to nourish and grow… is this what they call one body , two souls?
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Yes, my dear … ❤️
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I get an answer today. At least I wish to believe it to be an answer! 🙂 ❤
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All the answers are books within you waiting to be read.
The words will surprise you as the meaning of what you seek unveils. If you awake in the night with dreams, write them down. Your future self wants to show you the way 😌
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Really really liked the beginning and ending of the paras with ‘see me…’ .
This was a delight to read hon!❤️🌸
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You are a sweetheart Shreya and an avid reader! I am humbled by your presence.
Thank you for the wonderful compliment ❤
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Such a lovely poem, and equally lovely sketch! You are talented.
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Makes me smile to read how lovely this comment is…<3
Welcome to Written Frames and many thanks for your kind feedback ❤
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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 so beautiful!! Loved it!!
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And kudos for the sketch!!👏👏
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Just an attempt though.. 😛
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Lovely attempt 😍
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Kind you Parth 🙂
Many thanks!
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This is so love Shefali. So much beautiful.
Love the drawing as well. ❤️
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More love Priya ❤
Thank you so much 🙂
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Always here ❤️
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sweet, sweet words, softly layered with love.
have an imaginative day Shefali
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Such sweet words you say that it makes me all dreamy…Happily happy!
Many thanks Mr.Eddie. Have a great day…
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This is beautiful! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you sweet Soriah! ❤
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My pleasure, sweet Shefali ❤
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🙂 🙂 Much love sweetheart ❤ ❤
Welcome to Written Frames. Hope you enjoy your visit here!!
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Smiling and sensing a little rise in tears. It’s so wonderful to be welcomed to such a beautiful blog. I am loving my visit here. You so so lovely 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Loved it.. Shefali..
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so delighted to have you here… Thank you Tyler… 🙂
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excellent weaving of words.
This was marvelous. – When I dream of the dreams you dream
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❤ ❤ ❤ Many Thanks ❤ ❤
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This one is particularly beautiful Shefali. Vulnerability at its fullest. Exquisitely expressed.
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Thank you !! Delighted to have you reading my work….
🙂
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You’re very welcome. 🙂
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Lovely thoughts!
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You grace me with your comment… Many thanks 🙂 🙂
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